The rise of convenience food has helped people keep up with the speed of modern lifestyle. Do the advantages outweighs the disadvantages.
In the
last
few decades, fast Linking Words
food
has Use synonyms
occurred
mainstream in many societies,most notably in Western countries.Some people think that convenience foods are helped to live the modern lifestyle.Verb problem
become
This
essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of fast meals and provide a logical conclusion.
Admittedly,there are some benefits related to Linking Words
this
issue as an economy and spend less time.The first advantage of Linking Words
this
would be the economy;simply because of the cost,not everyone can purchase an expensive traditional meal Linking Words
such
as pasta,English breakfast and meatloaf which in the current century are worth a large amount of money.So Linking Words
this
way,many people have preferred to acquire fast Linking Words
food
namely hamburgers, French fries and instant noodles,which cost a little money.Another benefit is that Use synonyms
this
type of meal is considerably comfortable and quick in regular life.Linking Words
For instance
,at work or study, we do not have enough time for lunch or breakfast and Linking Words
then
we can easily buy instant Linking Words
food
which makes it very fast.In Use synonyms
such
a way,we can not only save money but Linking Words
also
waste less time on meals.
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On the other hand
,I believe that the drawbacks are more significant than the benefits.Linking Words
Firstly
, the fast dish is essentially more detrimental to a daily intake than a healthy diet a result which has entailed serious health problems.Linking Words
As scientists
show that Correct word choice
Scientists
the
foods Correct article usage
apply
such
as Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
hamburger
,fried chicken and hotdogs Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
are contained
incredibly high Wrong verb form
contain
fat
and salt which are responsible for Fix the agreement mistake
fats
such
ailments as obesity and heart disease.Linking Words
Secondly
,some fast Linking Words
food
centres deliberately attempt to attract children in order to reshape their future diets.One perhaps good example of Use synonyms
this
is the character Ronald Mcdonald,the bright clothes and smile of the Mcdonalds clowns are a beacon to the children.Having grown up eating in Linking Words
Mcdonald's
restaurants,people are likely to continue consuming there throughout their adult lives.
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McDonald's
To conclude
,Linking Words
although
convenience dish has certain positive effects on the economy and easy life,it is an extremely negative influence on human health and the future of children.In my opinion,I believe that the drawbacks outweigh its benefits.Linking Words
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task response
Your essay demonstrates a reasonable understanding of the topic and provides both advantages and disadvantages of convenience food. However, your points could be more fully developed and supported with deeper analysis.
coherence and cohesion
You have included an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion, which is good. However, you could improve the logical flow of your ideas and ensure that your paragraphs are connected more cohesively.