smoking not only harms the smokers but also those who are nearby. therefore, smoking should b banned in public places. discuss both views and give your opinion

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In modern times, the issue of smoking in public
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has become highly controversial. There are those who say that smoking in public areas should be banned,
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, others believe that it should not, in
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many I will examine both sides of the argument and provide my
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opinion. Generally speaking, there are two main reasons why
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believe that government should forbid smoking in
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,
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as hospitals, restaurants, and train stations. Perhaps the main reason why
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are in favour of
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idea is because cigarette
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is carcinogenic for the
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who breathe It. A good lustration of
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is that
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who
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and
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smokers can develop serious illnesses
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as lung cancer. A
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point in
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of banning smoking in public
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is that the
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from cigarettes smells terrible. If you stand next to someone who is smoking, your clothes will smell like tobacco
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for the rest of the day. Despite these arguments, there is
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a case for the idea that smoking in public
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should be allowed. The main reason why
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think that
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is a good idea is because it could negatively affect some businesses,
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as bars, nightclubs and restaurants.
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, many
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could lose their jobs.
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, the government could lose a lot of tax revenue from cigarettes.
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is because fewer
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would buy cigarettes and so pay less tax on them. In conclusion, it must be said that smoking in public areas has become a complex issue with no easy solutions. Despite arguments to the contrary, I very strongly feel that we should ban smoking in all public
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. If the government implements
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policy, we will have a healthier and cleaner society.
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