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The line chart below shows the public transport usage in four major cities around the world from 1980 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below shows the public transport usage in four major cities around the world from 1980 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph represents data regarding the trend curve of public transport usage in four metropoles from 1980 to 2019. Generally speaking,
the
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public means of transportation have become more popular in all the considered cities during
this
 temporal interval.
However
, the evolution of these curves is different, with
Tokyo
,
London
 and
Sydney
 facing a constant increase,
whereas
 New
York
 rising
more
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slightly. In 1980
Tokyo
 enjoyed the highest number of commuters (about 25
million
),
while
 New
York
,
London
, and
Sydney
 had 20
million
, roughly 15
million
 and slightly above 10
million
 users, respectively. From 1985 to 1995 the
asian
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 capital city enjoyed an increase in the prevalence of public transport usage by 20
million
 users, a steeper increase than that of the other considered cities. From 1995 to 2000 in
Tokyo
,
London
 and
Sydney
 the incidence of inhabitants profiting
of
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 trains and tubes kept on rising considerably and constantly, reaching a peak in 2019.
On the other hand
,
New
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York
 curve almost flattened
from
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 1995 and 2000. In the following
years
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 the tendency grew in an anaemic way, reaching the highest point in 2019, as the other three metropoles, with a little more than 50
million
of
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commuters. In conclusion in 2019
Tokyo
 accounted
roughly
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 80
million
of
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users,
London
 65
million
, New
York
 50
million
, and
Sydney
 almost 50
million
.
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