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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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The improvement of
science
 will enhance people’s standards of living. In my opinion, I agree that the advancement of
science
 helps people in many ways like in
food
 production, entertainment, and healthcare. The development of
science
 in the biology field will help us produce
food
 in larger quantities by using urban farming. It is one of the effective ways to produce quality
food
 for people, but it’s limited to the summer season, so with proper research scientists can produce all kinds of vegetables.
For instance
, countries like India which has overpopulation are unable to meet the
food
 demands of people,
as a result
 by developing new organic farming methods or urban farming, the government can provide sufficient
food
 and can even sell to other countries, which will improve countries economy.
Due to
 the rapid growth in technology, it become easier for us to do work from remote locations, teach
students
 effectively, etc.
For example
, during the Covid period,
students
 were able to attend class even though they were at home and some
students
 used
this
 time effectively to learn different software, have wrote journals to enhance their resumes.
Therefore
, the growth of
science
 can help us change our education and work methods. In conclusion, I would like to state that
science
 is a key factor in the lives of human beings, we can avoid chemical farming and change to organic or urban farming and produce huge
food
 with both quality and quantity. It is
also
 useful in the circulation of data around the globe and learning became free for
students
.
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