The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart displays some information about the results of research concerning the habit of drinking and purchasing
coffee
and tea in various cities in Australia.
Overall
, the percentage of those people who went to a café for coffee
or tea in the last
4 weeks is the highest in all five towns. In addition
, buying fresh coffee
accounted for the least proportion in all areas.
In Sydney, just above 60 per cent of citizens went to a café to drink a cup of coffee
or tea, and the proportions of those who bought fresh or instant coffee
were both roughly 45%. Furthermore
, the percentage of people with the habit of going to a café in both Melbourne and Hobart is quite the same, nearly 64%. Although
people in Hobart bought more instant coffee
in the last
couple of weeks, about 55%, those who lived in Melbourn purchased more fresh coffee
, almost 43%.
On the other hand
, in Brisbane, the percentage of the habitats paid for instant coffee
was just below the proportion of those who chose to go to a café, at 53% and 55% respectively, while
only 35% bought fresh coffee
. Concerning Adelaide, the proportions of buying coffee
and going to a café for drinking it were approximately the same, each 50%. Whilst those who paid for fresh coffee
accounted for only 35%.Submitted by mohammadmgh1381 on
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