The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the changes in the
crime
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rates in three different categories which were
burglary
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, car theft, and robbery in Newport city
center
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from 2003 to 2012. The
number
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of robberies kept at 500 to 900 from 2003 to 2012, which was always the lowest of the 10 years. Among all three areas of
crime
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, the
crime
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rate of
burglary
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changed in the most dramatic way. There were 3400
burglary
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incidents in 2003. In 2004, the
number
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rose to 3700 and started to drop to 1100 in 2008 at a stable pace. From 2008 to 2012,
burglary
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maintained around 1300 cases. Car theft had 2800 cases in 2003, the
number
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went down to 2050 in year 2006 and went back up to 2800 in 2012.
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,
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Car theft was the second-highest
crime
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in 2003, it topped the graph since 2007 and overstepped the
number
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of burglaries.
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, robberies were always kept at a low level.
In other words
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, the problem of robberies didn’t improve from 2003 to 2012.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words crime, burglary, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • instances of crime
  • significant decline
  • noticeable change
  • fluctuating trend
  • relatively stable
  • minor fluctuations
  • dramatic reduction
  • converged towards
  • crime rate
  • time frame
  • notable trajectory
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