The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the changes in the
crime
rates in three different categories which were burglary
, car theft, and robbery in Newport city center
from 2003 to 2012.
The Change the spelling
centre
number
of robberies kept at 500 to 900 from 2003 to 2012, which was always the lowest of the 10 years. Among all three areas of crime
, the crime
rate of burglary
changed in the most dramatic way. There were 3400 burglary
incidents in 2003. In 2004, the number
rose to 3700 and started to drop to 1100 in 2008 at a stable pace. From 2008 to 2012, burglary
maintained around 1300 cases. Car theft had 2800 cases in 2003, the number
went down to 2050 in year 2006 and went back up to 2800 in 2012.
Overall
, Although
Car theft was the second-highest crime
in 2003, it topped the graph since 2007 and overstepped the number
of burglaries. In addition
, robberies were always kept at a low level. In other words
, the problem of robberies didn’t improve from 2003 to 2012.Submitted by BeckyJ on
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