You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Neighbour

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I hope that everyone is doing well. I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I have been facing problems

due to

shared parking space. I struggle every day to find a space to park my car in my own parking area because people are not utilising the space in a good way as instructed by society. And, they either park them mid-way or in the wrong place or occupy the block available for two cars. I suggest that each one of us including me should park the vehicles in

such

a way that we always leave room for the other individual to put his car on stand-by after you without going through any trouble. I

also

propose that we all should try and meet

this

coming Sunday and discuss

this

matter so that our time and energy are not wasted on a daily basis just solving silly issues. I look forward to seeing you soon. Yours sincerely, Rahul Bhatt

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

161 words

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