The diagram below shows a neighborhood before and after a mall was constructed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows a neighborhood before and after a mall was constructed. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following diagram illustrates neighbourhood changes after the new huge Mall. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that there were a bookstore and a shoe store
as well as
big woods before the construction process, and the neighbourhood opened more layout, some facilities were eliminated, and was a greater emphasis on large two-parking lots. Before the reorganisation, the most noticeable difference was two stores with a lot of woods nearby, which are no longer there today, and these were transformed into a Mall with a parking lot in the south.
Furthermore
, to the north of the Neighborhood, there were plenty of houses and two main roads for drivers which remained unchanged. In terms of Houses, to the north, two of them are eliminated and newly built a small car park.
In addition
, other houses are still in the same places after the changes.
Lastly
, in the southeast, there was Lake and a big park surrounded by trees,
however
, all of them were replaced by the parking lot.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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