Many people had the view that it is better to buy their home rather than rent it. Do you agree or disagree this statement?

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Many individuals considered that it purchasing their
house
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better than hiring it. Personally, I totally agree with
this
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statement and will demonstrate the reason why. With regards to individuals, purchasing their apartment helps us feel comfortable and convenient.
Firstly
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,
family
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the family
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feel happy and interested because
box
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the box
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have
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has
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freehold
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a freehold
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and
create
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creates
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something not allowed when they
hiring
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hire
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their
house
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.
Secondly
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, folk can expand and explain because if they buy something,
we
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they
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won’t change to
other
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another house
other houses
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house
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when they forgot to
paid
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for
host
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a host
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and built
the
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their
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dream
house
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.
On the other hand
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,
got
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getting
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their condo helps us feel
quite
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quiet
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and chill. If they got the
house
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, we will have a quiet room and concentrate because around the
house
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didn’t have many houses and
noisies
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noises
, so you had
feel
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felt
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good to rest and did exercise very quietly. People chose to
got
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the
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a
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house
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near the company or city because it was convenient for commuting, so
you
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they
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worked by bus or car. It helped us to save time and did
necessary
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the necessary
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work. In conclusion,
purchased
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purchasing
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it had some
benefit
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benefits
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reasons for people so I believed that they thought it good
reasons
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reason
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to decide you should
did
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something.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • property ladder
  • mortgage
  • rental agreement
  • down payment
  • equity
  • appreciate
  • rental market
  • monthly installments
  • credit score
  • repairs and maintenance
  • landlord
  • tenant
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