Many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather than rent in. Do you agree with this statement or not?

The majority of
people
often said that
buy
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a
house
is better than
rent
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renting
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the
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a
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house
.I agree with
this
statement and I will explain the reasons why in the following essay.
Firstly
,I believe that
buy
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buying
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the
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a
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house
is not a bad choice for everyone.Because if you had
house
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a house
the house
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,you wouldn’t need to pay for the price of the
house
.
Beside
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that,if you want to emigrate
in
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to
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the
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another
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other country like abroad,you must have
the
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a
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personal fortune.
Secondly
,
almost
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most
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people
also
said that the percentage of
thief
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thieves
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intrusive your money and easy go to
rent
house
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a house
the house
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.Actually, the
house
is safer than
rent
house
.
Moreover
,a certain barrier is vital but
also
the
people
rent
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who rent
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house
is not care about that
than
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as
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the
people
buy
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who buy
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the
house
.
On the other hand
,
rent
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renting
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house
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a house
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has benefits like if you do not want to live in that place,you can change the destination.
In addition
to
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apply
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,you can meet new neighbours and have a new opportunity.After that,you can see and know about the new
cultural
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culture
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in that place.Another reason is you can be
indepentdant
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independent
early
,
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so that you can not depend on your parent and have a
dreamlife
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dream life
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like you want.
To sum up
,If
i
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I
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have to choose between
buy
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buying
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house
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a house
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or
rent
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renting
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house
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a house
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,
i
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I
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will
choose
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tochoose
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buy
house
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a house
the house
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.Absolutely,it
crucial
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is crucial
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to have ownership and can make me feel safer than
rent
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renting
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house
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a house
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.
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