Many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather rent it.Do you agree with this statement or not?
Most
of
Change preposition
apply
people
think that it is better to buy a house
rather than rent
it.The writer agree
with Change the verb form
agrees
this
statement and will demonstrate the reasons why the writer agree
with it.
On the one hand,Change the verb form
agrees
the
Correct article usage
apply
people
who work
far away from their house
they
can Correct pronoun usage
apply
rent
a house
for a short time
to work
there.They also
save a lot of time
to go for
Change preposition
to
work
and go back to their house
,people
can make friends arround
their Correct your spelling
around
house
to create a good relationship to help each others
.When Change to a singular noun
other
people
rent
a house
, they have a lots
of Correct the article-noun agreement
a lot
lots
time
to thinking
about Change the form of the verb
think
create
a Change the verb form
creating
familly
or thinking about Correct your spelling
family
buy
a Change the verb form
buying
house
to live long with it.According to
the US news,the percent
of Replace the word
percentage
people
rent
a Correct pronoun usage
who rent
house
was very high it accounting for a
half of Remove the article
apply
population
Correct article usage
the population
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
mean
Change the verb form
means
people
are very confused about rent
Wrong verb form
renting
house
or Correct article usage
a house
buy
a Wrong verb form
buying
house
for them
.But many Correct pronoun usage
themselves
risky
if Replace the word
risks
people
rent
a house
do not know about it,they can not repair their house
as their hobby because it ensure
that the next person Change the verb form
ensures
rent
will not Correct pronoun usage
who rent
satisfied
Add a missing verb
be satisfied
about
their hobby,every Change preposition
with
places
Change to a singular noun
place
when
Correct word choice
where
people
rent
house
will have many difficult rules to obey and it very noisy to keep up with.Incidents will happen Add an article
a house
arround
their Correct your spelling
around
house
espeacilly
the Correct your spelling
especially
house
when they rent
it and they do not indemnify their asset about it,and high risk of fire and explosion is the most worry when people
rent
a hose
,it can happen suddenly without forewarned for them Correct your spelling
house
to
run away.
Fix the infinitive
apply
On the other hand
,people
buy
a Wrong verb form
buying
house
will have many benifits
Correct your spelling
benefits
to
them as Change preposition
for
people
can make friends or their neighbor
Change the spelling
neighbour
to
make a large relationship.Change the verb form
apply
People
do not worry the
price they have to pay for their Change preposition
about the
house
each months
or the price spike Change to a singular noun
month
for
each Change preposition
apply
years
and do not pay for repair for Change to a singular noun
year
your
Correct pronoun usage
their
house
each months
,they Change to a singular noun
month
also
save a lots
of money for them to do many things.When Correct the article-noun agreement
a lot
lots
people
retire,they do not know how to make money when they out
of money,so the Add a missing verb
are out
house
they buy before they retire will become a good place for them to relax and enjoy thier
life.Many Correct your spelling
their
people
will have a
imagination to create their Change the article
the
house
for their hobby and feeling
free when they go back Wrong verb form
feel
their
home.Correct pronoun usage
apply
Moreover
,the feeling when they prond their asset they take a long time
to get it.
In conclusion,people
should buy a house
for them to live comfortable
and Change the word
comfortably
do
not worry Unnecessary verb
apply
the
public area when they Change preposition
about the
rent
a house
.People
who work
or study far away from their house
should rent
a house
to live their
for a short Replace the word
there
time
,it easy to stable their work
and study.Moreover
,it will become a good place to relax and enjoy their life when they retire their
Change preposition
from their
work
and do not worry the
price they have to pay each Change preposition
about the
months
Change to a singular noun
month
,.
Change the punctuation
,
.
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