Many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather than rent it. Do you agree with this statement or not .

It is often said that their own
propertics
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property
such
as
home
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is more
convinient
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convenient
than
rent
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it.
This
writer agrees with
this
statements
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and will explain why
during
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the following essay.
To begin
with
home
,
rent
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home
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a home
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will
effect
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affect
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on price problem. But we buy
house
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, we will
convenient
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be convenient
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for commuting.
Moreover
, we can get
in
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into
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debt when we buy
house
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,we will motivate to earn money. We can do everything when we want.
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we can decorate our room, we can
plan
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plant
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trees,
we
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and we
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can
comfortable
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be comfortable
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on time. Another point to consider to buy
house
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a house
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is no need to do
contract
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many times. Because it waste time and
annoying
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is annoying
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for users. When we
rent
house
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a house
the house
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,we must pay
rent
every month and
buy
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buying
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house
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a house
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is not
need
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needed
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. when we buy
house
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a house
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, we feel safe and
comfortable
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than we
rent
it.
Moreover
, we don't have to worry about being stolen. In conclusion, it
fact
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the fact
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that buy
house
will
benifit
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benefit
than in our life.
Besides
that
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we can do everything which we like. When we go back
home
, we feel
relax
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after one working day.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • property ladder
  • mortgage
  • rental agreement
  • down payment
  • equity
  • appreciate
  • rental market
  • monthly installments
  • credit score
  • repairs and maintenance
  • landlord
  • tenant
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