This line graph shows the visitor ratios of four attractions in Brighton, England from 1980 to 2010.

This line graph shows the visitor ratios of four attractions in Brighton, England from 1980 to 2010.
This
line graph shows the visitor ratios of four
attractions
in Brighton, England from 1980 to 2010. Throughout
this
period, the Pavilion and Festival stand out as the most visited
attractions
.
Initially
, the popularity of the Piers was limited, but by 2010 it had gradually increased, surpassing the
Art
Gallery in terms of visitor numbers. The Festival,
in particular
, has remained relatively stable at around 27%. Pavilions and festivals are often visited at the same time, indicating their popularity. It should be noted that
art
galleries saw a sharp increase from 23% to 38% in the mid-1980s, followed by a gradual decline. The number of visitors to the piers fluctuated until 2000,
then
gradually rose, reaching 22% in 2010.
Finally
, the pavilion reached a peak of 48% between 1995 and 2000, securing its top position among
attractions
.
Conversely
, the pier and the
art
gallery were the least popular, both at 8%. In summary, the popularity hierarchy of
attractions
showed that pavilions had the highest number of visitors, followed by festivals, piers, and
finally
art
galleries
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