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This line graph shows the visitor ratios of four attractions in Brighton, England from 1980 to 2010.

This line graph shows the visitor ratios of four attractions in Brighton, England from 1980 to 2010.
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This
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 line graph shows the visitor ratios of four
attractions
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 in Brighton, England from 1980 to 2010. Throughout
this
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 period, the Pavilion and Festival stand out as the most visited
attractions
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.
Initially
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, the popularity of the Piers was limited, but by 2010 it had gradually increased, surpassing the
Art
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 Gallery in terms of visitor numbers. The Festival,
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, has remained relatively stable at around 27%. Pavilions and festivals are often visited at the same time, indicating their popularity. It should be noted that
art
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 galleries saw a sharp increase from 23% to 38% in the mid-1980s, followed by a gradual decline. The number of visitors to the piers fluctuated until 2000,
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 gradually rose, reaching 22% in 2010.
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, the pavilion reached a peak of 48% between 1995 and 2000, securing its top position among
attractions
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.
Conversely
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, the pier and the
art
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 gallery were the least popular, both at 8%. In summary, the popularity hierarchy of
attractions
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 showed that pavilions had the highest number of visitors, followed by festivals, piers, and
finally
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art
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 galleries

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words attractions, art with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "ratios" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.
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