Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: Give details of your stay What were the high & low points of the hotel What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about the hotel Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

Dear Mr John, I am writing to propose the improve the quality of your
hotel
facilities. I stayed at your
hotel
for three days and I was used to the
hotel
's facilities but I am not satisfied. In my room is duty
however
nobody cleans it. The bed sheets are not changed for new customers like me.
In addition
, the room doesn't have a refrigerator
therefore
I don't have cool water to drink.
However
, It has an air-conditioner that makes me sleep well at night.
In addition
, the bathroom with cool water shower and bathtub in the morning and evening. I have suggestions for you to improve the quality
hotel
. You should equip more electronic devices to serve customers
such
as a refrigerator, hot water shower machine, and hairdryer.
In addition
, you should clean the room before renting. I hope these suggestions are useful to your
hotel
. Yours faithfully, Hieu
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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