the table and chart below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018
The provided table compares data on the budget of police
according to
four different income sources
in the pound in one area of Britain for two different years
which are 2017 and 2018, and the pie chart presents information about the percentage of the money spent on three different categories in the same place and in the same years
.
As a general trend, all of the sources
increased in the table while
in the pie chart spending on building and ,transport almost the same percentage in the same years
and others changed it.
As the diagram suggests in the table, the ratio of the national government had the most income sources
and ıt increased dramatically while
the income of local taxes was second and ıt rose rapidly. On the other hand
, sources
of other were the last
and also
it increased very minimally. Therefore
, the total sources
of the police budget increased in 2018.
In the pie chart, the percentage of salaries in 2017 had three quarters, although
in 2018 it declined to 69%, it was a large section again. Additionally
, the proportion of technology in 2017 got a tiny fraction about 8% but in 2018 it went up nearly 15% and it remained second area in ranking. However
, the ratio of buildings and transport had the same ratio in both years
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