the table and chart below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018

the table and chart below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018
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The provided table compares data on the budget of police
according to
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four different income
sources
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in the pound in one area of Britain for two different
years
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which are 2017 and 2018, and the pie chart presents information about the percentage of the money spent on three different categories in the same place and in the same
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. As a general trend, all of the
sources
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increased in the table
while
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in the pie chart spending on building and ,transport almost the same percentage in the same
years
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and others changed it. As the diagram suggests in the table, the ratio of the national government had the most income
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and ıt increased dramatically
while
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the income of local taxes was second and ıt rose rapidly.
On the other hand
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,
sources
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of other were the
last
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and
also
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it increased very minimally.
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, the total
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of the police budget increased in 2018. In the pie chart, the percentage of salaries in 2017 had three quarters,
although
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in 2018 it declined to 69%, it was a large section again.
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, the proportion of technology in 2017 got a tiny fraction about 8% but in 2018 it went up nearly 15% and it remained second area in ranking.
However
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, the ratio of buildings and transport had the same ratio in both
years
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sources, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • allocation
  • budgetary constraints
  • community policing
  • economic conditions
  • expenditures
  • funding allocation
  • governmental policies
  • operational efficiency
  • personnel costs
  • public safety
  • resource allocation
  • revenue sources
  • surveillance technology
  • trend analysis
  • fiscal responsibility
  • capital investments
  • public sector spending
  • crime rate
  • policy reform
  • infrastructure upgrades
  • staff training
  • emergency response capabilities
  • fiscal year
  • financial oversight
  • budget cuts
  • incremental increase
  • law enforcement agencies
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