some children spend hours evey day an their spartphones.

Recently,
Children
passing their time with mobile
phones
have become a popular topic and many people think it is worth discussing.
However
, they still have not come to an agreement with each other on whether
this
situation is a positive impact or a negative impact on
children
's lives. Whatever each side of the argument thinks, I strongly agree that there are numerous harmful effects for them.
To begin
with, nowadays using mobile
phones
is pervading day by day in our society, especially, among
children
.
Thus
,
children
break down their bonds in social environments like family and friends which can lead that their development negatively.
For example
, they cannot express themselves to someone or they can have a lack of self-confidence. Another effect is that they can mix between real and virtual worlds because they believe that online games.
Moreover
, they can share private knowledge with someone and
then
their family's money is stolen or they apply some behaviour which they look at in the game like fighting or they can use scurrilous language.
On the other hand
, many people think that spending most of their time on the phone is beneficial.
Firstly
, mobile
phones
give the opportunity for them to learn a language or lessons and it is a very easily accessible method for school.
For instance
, they can play games on mobile
as well as
learn some new worlds.
Secondly
,
children
's crime has increased so
children
’s families think that
phones
are a good way to embroider them.
To sum up
, in spite of the fact that smartphones are suitable for education, using the phone at an early age affects them badly . It should not be forgotten that it is not only a bad effect on
children
but
also
is a dangerous matter for all people.
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