Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. Do you agree?

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It is argued that corporations should be compelled to give a certain proportion of their executive level roles to females given that that over half of the workforce is female in the West. It is agreed that businesses should be obliged to assign a significant percentage of top-level posts to women.

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, that women should be paid an equal amount of money for doing the same job as a man, and

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, the fact that girls are currently outperforming boys on many university courses; followed by a reasoned conclusion. Despite years of so-called ‘equal rights’ for women in the

workplace they

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continue to be underpaid. Many women who do exactly the same job as their male colleagues earn less money and

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is unfair.

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, a recent survey of accountancy and legal firms in the United Kingdom found that women earn on average 17% less than men with identical roles.

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may be due to women taking maternity leave and falling behind their male counterparts.

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unfairness

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by the fact that females are currently getting higher grades in most university courses. Even previously male-dominated fields,

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as law and medicine, now see women in the ascendency and they should,

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, employers should bear in mind that roles should be handed out on merit, not gender alone. In conclusion, women do deserve an equal share of the good jobs available, namely because they are capable of doing an equally good job as men and are achieving higher academic standards than men at university. It is recommended that companies heed the advice in

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Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. Do you agree?

Your opinion

These days people spend more than more time at work and less time at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Some people think that they can make as much noise as they want, while others think that the amount of noise people make should be strictly controlled. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Other say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Disucss both these view and give your own opinions.

Some people think residents should keep their streets clean and tidy while others sy it is government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give yto our opinion.

‘’Prevention is better than cure.’’ Researching and treating diseases is too costly , so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. Do you agree or disagree with the given statement ?