The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of the number of people living in four Asian countries , the
Philippines
,
Malaysia
,
Thailand
and Indonesia in the year from 1970 to 2020 with projections for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
, There has been a significant increase in the
population
residing in all four nations .
Malaysia
stands 1st position in the
population
over the period , as compared to others .
To begin
with , the
Philippines
and
Malaysia
contained around 30 % of residing in 1970 . In 2020 ,
Malaysia
experienced substantial growth reaching almost 80 % of the
population
.
While
the
Philippines
had fluctuated and reached approximately 45 % .
Furthermore
,
Thailand
contained around 20 % and Indonesia had 15 % of the people living in 1970 . After 30 years , both countries had the same
population
with 25% of the total .
On the contrary
, the Indonesian
population
rose rapidly with half of the residents living.
While
Thailand
had increased slightly in the number of citizens (25 %) in 2020. Looking ahead , projections indicate
further
growth in city
population
across all four countries. By 2040 ,
Malaysia
will have the largest percentage of the
population
with 80% Indonesia and the
Philippines
with accountable for 60% and 55% respectively .
however
,
Thailand
will have a small percentage of the
population
with around 45 %
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words philippines, malaysia, thailand, population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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