The diagram illustrates the life cycle process of frogs in a pond.

The diagram illustrates the life cycle process of frogs in a pond.
The prone diagram shows the process involved in the life cycle of pond frogs.There are eighteen steps in the process, from having eggs in the pond to turning teens into adult frogs
at the end
.
The first step is
that abandoned eggs are turned into embryos in order to lay the foundation for the tadpoles to be clinging to the water plant.
In addition
, the external gills are grown owing to make breathing possible. Followingly, the tail is grown to make
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way for the following stage; at
this
point, the hindlegs appear which gives the creature a look like a frog. After being grown adequately, it is
then
lived from food which is stored in its tail. Once, the consumption has been started, the front legs are
then
seemed. At
this
point, the tail is become shorter and
then
it is turned into an adolescent frog.
Subsequently
, it is become threefold larger and altered to a youth
accordingly
.
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