The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates information about stores which were opened and closed in a given country from 2011 to 2018.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the tendency of both opening and closing shops
decreased over that period
with a significant drop in 2015 in terms of closed shops
. In terms of opened shops
frequency declined but mostly fluctuated during that period
of time.
Firstly
, we can see that in 2011 were about 8500 shops
which opened in contrast
with 2012 when the tendency of openings decreased more than twofold. During the next two years the number of opened shops
increased by 1000 respectively and they started to decline steadily with slight
increase in 2017.
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a slight
Secondly
, when we see data about closed shops
it is obvious that during that period
of time, fewer shops
closed overall
. However
, compared with other years in 2013 over 7000 shops
closed which was the dominating year in this
term. In comparison, the least amount of shops
closed in 2015 which was an exception. In 2016 the number of closed shops
return by nearly 5000 and continued to fluctuate for the rest of the given period
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