Today our communications, medicine and transport systems all depend on computer technology. Our reliance on computer technology in these fields has created a dangerous situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

The developments we have achieved during the

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century caused a rapid change in our behaviour and habits. From communication to transportation, everything has changed, so that our tasks are less demanding and repetitive. Even though our life has become easier, it might change in the

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future. Despite the disadvantages, I am inclined to believe that as far as we dominate

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technology, the will not be detrimental. It is certain that the recent technological advantages have altered the way our tasks are carried out. Even writing books or teaching have experienced plenty of changes which, in fact, facilitate the task of the writer or teacher.

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, a teacher who had to correct a sizeable amount of exams

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could use the latest AI models so that the time required to finalize

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task might be reduced to minutes, when it used to take hours, if not days.

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, the introduction of these advantages

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led to a safer environment. When it comes to transportation, it is common knowledge that the death rate

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human errors is humongous. Many self-driving cars have reduced these casualties by eliminating

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error. Some people may believe that the lack of human decision might provoke major threats. Even though, the algorithms and the design that rules these instruments are done by humans, the human errors themselves are a bigger concern. Following all the points mentioned above, it is crucial to note that machines might never replace humans.

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, artificial creations have come to stay and learning how to live with them might ease our

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.Today our communications, medicine and transport systems all depend on computer technology. Our reliance on computer technology in these fields has created a dangerous situation.