The table and pie chart gives information about the population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas.

The table and pie chart gives information about the population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas.
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The given pie chart illustrates the percentages of different nationalities that make up the
Australian
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population
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,
while
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the table gives information about whether they live in urban or rural areas. In general, it is evident that the vast majority of Australia’s
population
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is of
Australian
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nationality
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.
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, most people in
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country, irrespective of their
nationality
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, opt to live in cities. The percentage of the
Australian
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population
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that is
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of
Australian
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nationality
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is 73%,
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the figures for people of British or other nationalities are significantly lower, at 7% and 14% respectively. Meanwhile, 3% of the
population
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comes from New Zealand,
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2% are of Chinese
nationality
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. 1% of Australia’s
population
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comes from the Netherlands. From the table, it can be seen that 80% of Australians choose to reside in cities,
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89% of the British and 90% of New Zealanders.
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, 99% of Chinese live in the city, as do 83% of the Dutch.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words australian, population, nationality with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographic data
  • population distribution
  • nationality groups
  • urban planning
  • cultural diversity
  • social policy
  • demographic trends
  • rural vs. urban distribution
  • reflect on the implications
  • cultural exchange
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