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In many countries, school children are required to wear school uniforms. Do you think this should be enforced in all schools?

#countries #school #children #uniforms #schools
In
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 present time, various schools in different nations do not give permission to their student to wear casual clothing and bound them to follow the rule of
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dress
 code. I personally deem that
this
 rule should be implemented in other educational institutions too because it would bring uniformity and avoid environmental distractions for children. To commence with the virtues of uniformity, wearing similar
dress
 culture would bring equality among children from diverse backgrounds.
This
 means, they may look alike, as it might remove the difference between
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minor's family
economical
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 conditions by giving them
similar
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a similar
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 look.
For instance
,
Delhi
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the Delhi
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 public school of India promotes
identical
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an identical
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 dressing system, where 90%
students
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of students
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 come from unprivileged living conditions and
still
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 respected and treated equally by
rest
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the rest
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 of the 10%
enrolled
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of enrolled
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 students
belong
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who belong
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 to rich families. Henceforth,
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above mentioned
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 example vividly demonstrates
that
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how identical attire could leave
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a positive
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pshycological
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psychological
 impact on
young
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the young
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mind
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 and save many lives from becoming the victim of bullying too.
Moreover
, having a regulation of carrying a particular
dress
 code can limit the chances of juveniles
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being distraction
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distraction
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 from their studies. To expound, when they are not allowed to
dress
 up distinctively from others, it may require less time for them to get ready.
Also
, they might not get
much opportunity
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 to fascinate towards
materialistic
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 world, which can distract them from their goal. To exemplify
this
, Fairfield School of Pakistan
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 announces
best
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the best
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 academic results annually issue
hefty
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 fine to its students
,
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 if they do not follow their prescribed
dressing
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.
Thus
, it could be considered that by following
similar
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a similar
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dress
 policy, children stay more focused
in
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 studies. In conclusion, it can be
summarised
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 that
an
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enforcement of
dress
 code tradition offers enormous benefits.
Therefore
, there may not wrong
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 it, if
this
 regulation is imposed in all schools.
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