The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.

The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.
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The line graph illustrates the percentage of
cars
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possessive in Britain in the year between 1971 and 2007.
Overall
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, we can see that people who did not have a
car
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ratio were higher in 1971 .
Whereas
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, the ratio of
households
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with regular use of three or more
cars
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had increased rapidly. In 1971 , around 50% of British people did not have a
car
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. At the same time ,
car
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ownership with one
car
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was quite higher (44%).
While
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only 7% of Britain had two
cars
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. The lowest category was
households
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with three or more
cars
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which was almost zero percentage .
Furthermore
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, one-
car
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ownership was the most common category which did not change over the period .
However
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, the biggest change was in
households
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without a
car
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which was a dramatic fall and reached 25 % in 2007 .
On the contrary
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, there was a sharply increased in ownership of two
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accounting for around 27% .
Moreover
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, the proportion of
households
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with more than two
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steadily rose to around 6% in 2007.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, car, households with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • household
  • trend
  • fluctuate
  • increase
  • decrease
  • ownership
  • period
  • peak
  • dip
  • noteworthy
  • consistent
  • dramatic
  • highlight
  • significant
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