The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee nd tea buying and drinking habits

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The bar chart illustrates the outcome of research about people's

coffee

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and tea buying and drinking habits if five Australian cities

such

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as Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane,

Adelaide

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and Hobart in the

last

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four weeks.

Overall

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, the majority of people went to a cafe for

coffee

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or tea

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the least residents brought fresh

coffee

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instead

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of instant

coffee

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To begin

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with, except

Adelaide

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, Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart show the highest values for

went

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going

show examples

to a cafe for

coffee

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or tea between 55% to 65%

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Adelaide

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at 49%. The least people who brought instant

coffee

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in Sydney at around 46% and the highest percentage showed in Hobart at 53%. The other three countries fluctuated between 45%-53%. Among the three factors, brought fresh

coffee

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illustrated lower consumers. Both Brisbane and

Adelaide

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account for approximately 33% and 34& respectively. The rest of the three countries fluctuated between lower than 44% and greater than 38%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, adelaide with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.

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6
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

152 words

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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee nd tea buying and drinking habits

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