The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by choosing and describe the main idea, and make comparisons where appropriate.
The provided bar chart illustrates information about
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changes
countries
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countries'
country's
employment
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figures
percentage
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a percentage
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, male's
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the male's
rate
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is higher
female's
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the female's
rate
. And, in 2005 employment
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the employment
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was higher
rate
.
When it comes to male patterns, Iceland had the higest
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highest
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in 1995 and 2005. They
figure had around 85% in 2005. And, Correct your spelling
The
rate
of the UK significantly increased by about 18% than in 1995. Correct article usage
the rate
Also
, Newzealand and The USA increased by 10%. And, Australia's rate
the
lowest by around 55% ,70% and in 1995 ,2005 respectively.
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Australian
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of the lowest too. the highest female employment
rates country was Switzerland in 1995 and 2005. Also
, Newzealand female figure significantly increased by about 16% than in 1995. And, The USA rate
increased by around 14% too. Iceland and the UK went up by just 10% respectively.Submitted by moneekun on
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