You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about wheter to go to college or to try get a job. you think he/she should get a job. write a letter to this friend. In your letter - say why he/she would not enjoy going to college - explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her - suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Jean,
I writing
this
letter regarding between going to college or Correct article usage
a jobs
jobs
. Let me describe my opinions.
As I know about your reason, you say about your family have Fix the agreement mistake
job
a
economics Change the article
an
backgrounds
. In Correct the article-noun agreement
background
additions
, you have 2 little Fix the agreement mistake
addition
brother
that currently in studied on elementary Change to a plural noun
brothers
schools
.
With Fix the agreement mistake
school
this
issue, I would prefer you to go to get job
because now many Add an article
a job
the job
company
wants to Change to a plural noun
companies
employe
person who has Correct your spelling
employ
experience
Add an article
the experience
to
Change preposition
in
thier
Correct your spelling
their
jobs
. During the university, it also
needs to spent
more in college Change the verb
spend
besides
students fees. For instances
, when you had laboratory courses, it made you Fix the agreement mistake
instance
spent
more in printing the files, and Wrong verb form
spend
bought
some equipment to support your study. Wrong verb form
buying
Consequently
, I thought you to finds
some job than Change the verb form
find
incharge
Correct your spelling
in charge
on
Change preposition
of
university
.
With Add an article
the university
this
problem, I'd like you to find the jobs
that you really
interest Add a missing verb
are really
with
. If you prefer Change preposition
in
in
managing files, I'd suggest you Change preposition
apply
to
find Remove the particle
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
jobs
that have related like admins jobs
and hospitality jobs
, because this
roles don't really Change the determiner
these
needs
high Change the verb form
need
educations
.
I kindly ask you to review my opinions. I'm looking forward Fix the agreement mistake
education
for
your Change preposition
to
decisions
.
Regards,
Fix the agreement mistake
decision
Jion
Correct your spelling
Join
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