You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about wheter to go to college or to try get a job. you think he/she should get a job. write a letter to this friend. In your letter - say why he/she would not enjoy going to college - explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her - suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him/her

Dear Jean, I writing

this

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letter regarding between going to college or

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jobs

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. Let me describe my opinions. As I know about your reason, you say about your family have

a

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economics

backgrounds

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. In

additions

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, you have 2 little

brother

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that currently in studied on elementary

schools

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. With

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issue, I would prefer you to go to get

job

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a job

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because now many

company

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companies

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wants to

employe

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employ

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person who has

experience

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the experience

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to

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in

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thier

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their

jobs

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. During the university, it

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needs to

spent

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more in college

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students fees. For

instances

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, when you had laboratory courses, it made you

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more in printing the files, and

bought

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some equipment to support your study.

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, I thought you to

finds

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some job than

incharge

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in charge

on

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university

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. With

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problem, I'd like you to find the

jobs

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that you

really

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interest

with

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. If you prefer

in

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managing files, I'd suggest you

to

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find

the

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jobs

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that have related like admins

jobs

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and hospitality

jobs

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, because

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this

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roles don't really

needs

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high

educations

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education

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. I kindly ask you to review my opinions. I'm looking forward

for

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your

decisions

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decision

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. Regards,

Jion

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Join