The graph and the table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
The line graph depicts the usage of
water
globally by three different sectors which are Agriculture, Industrial and Domestic use, while
, the table illustrates the percentage of that consumed in 2 nations in the year
2000.
Overall
, according to
graph
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the graph
the
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apply
water
was used at highest
level by the agriculture sector as compared to rest two segments, Add an article
the highest
whereas
, as per the table Brazil has maximum
amount of Add an article
the maximum
a maximum
water
utilization in comparison to Congo.
On the one hand, water
used by Agriculture part has dramatically surged from 500 km3 in the year
1990 to 3000km3
in the Correct your spelling
3000 km3
year
2000. Moreover
, Industrial use and domestic use of water
was
consistent at Change the verb form
were
same
level between the years 1900 to 1950 at only 2km3 respectively, Add an article
the same
however
, it rose gradually in the year
2000 where
the Industrial usage was Correct word choice
when
at
600km3 and Change preposition
apply
domestic
sector was at only 200km3 which was at lowest as compared to other two parts.
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the domestic
According to
the table, Brazil had the highest population with 176 million, irrigated land at 26,500km2 and water
consumption each
individual at 359m3, Change preposition
for each
whereas
, in contrast
, the water
consumption in Democratic
Republic of Congo country was Correct article usage
the Democratic
least
in all areas.Correct article usage
the least
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