Many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather than rent it. Do you agree with this statement or not

The majority of

people

find that renting their own

house

is more beneficial than buying one. In another way, some

people

think paying for a

house

is more convenient and more comfortable.

This

writer certainly

agree

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that buying habitation is the best especially

in

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apply

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recently and will discuss

below

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it below

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. The rudimentary

of

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advantages

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advantage

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of buying a

house

is that

people

can feel more convenient when they own one.

For example

, if

people

rent a

house

, they have to follow the rules which the owner

given

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before.

At

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consequently

, they can feel disagreeable because of following too

much

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compound

ordinance

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.

However

, if

people

do not rent one, they can save some money or they can make money when they buy a

house

.

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not

pay

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paying

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for

renting

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rent

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house

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a house

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monthly, they can just pay

as

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at

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once when they buy a

house

and if they find that the

house

is not more appropriate to live in, they can sell

or

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use

for

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it for

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rent.

As a consequence

, they can escalate their income per month and improve their social life.

Moreover

, the

house

give

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people

their private space for doing their

works

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work

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. Individuals have more

place

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places

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to complete or do their private work without distracting or commenting by lots of local citizens as so

as

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that

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their social life become more restful.

Also

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humans can control their timetable. They will not care too much about time when they own a

house

and they will be free to come back home or go outside without taking the time recently. In conclusion, obtaining a

house

can be more restful in your finance and your timetable. You can save and earn more money if you have a plan to raise your income by selling houses or

for

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renting.