The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made . Write al least 150 words to summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

These pictures illustrate how
ketchup
is produced and packed in order to be sold to customers. There are 15 stages in the diagrams, from picking
tomatoes
and put in
basket
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a basket
the basket
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, to enjoying tomato
ketchup
at home
The first step is
that
tomatoes
are picked and put
baskets
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in baskets
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. After that, they are divided into 2
group
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groups
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: good and bad
tomatoes
so that tomato
ketchup
con
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can
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get
a
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as
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high quality as possible. Good
tomatoes
are
continously
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continuously
delivered to factories, where they
are removed
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have removed
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some unnecessary
part
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parts
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like stalks, skin,
seeds
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and seeds
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.
Then
placed in
container
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a container
the container
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and crushed to
be become
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become
have become
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liquid. At
this
point, sugar, salt,
vinegar
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and vinegar
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are added.
The next step is
that the liquid is boiled and
then
left
about
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for about
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2 hours
The following step is
that
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apply
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poured into bottles, which are
then
labeled
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labelled
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. Before being packed into boxes, the bottles are checked
quality
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for quality
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.
Following
this
, these boxes are loaded onto
lories
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lorries
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, which take them to
supermakets
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supermarkets
. The
last
steps
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step
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is that you buy a bottle of
tomatoes
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tomato
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ketchup
and enjoy
with
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it with
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hamburger
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a hamburger
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and fries.
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