the charts below show the changes in onwership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. summaring the information by slecting and reporting hte main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#show #changes #onwership #appliances #amount #time #housework #households #country #information #hte #features #comparisons
The top line
graph
shows the Use synonyms
percentage
of households Use synonyms
who
owned three types of electrical appliances- washing machine, Correct pronoun usage
that
refrigerator
, and vacuum cleaner- in the Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
99 year
Add a hyphen
99-year
period
between 1920 and 2019. And the bottom Use synonyms
graph
shows the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
hours
that each household spent on housework each week during the same entire Use synonyms
period
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, there are two key points. Linking Words
First,
throughout the entire Linking Words
period
, washing Use synonyms
machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigerator
, and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
were similar in that the Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
percentage
of them all increased significantly in 99 years. And Use synonyms
secondly
, people spent less time Linking Words
in
doing housework each week- washing clothes, preparing meals, and cleaning- in Change preposition
apply
this
Linking Words
period
.
Looking at the top Use synonyms
graph
in more detail we can see that at the beginning of Use synonyms
this
entire Linking Words
period
, the Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
refrigerator
was only above 0 percent. Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
This
Linking Words
number
Use synonyms
then
grew dramatically before reaching the maximum of 100% in 1980. It Linking Words
then
remained Linking Words
the
same level from 1980 to 2019. Change preposition
at the
However
, the other two categories of electrical appliances increased more steadily. In 1920, there was just 40% of washing machine, but by the end of the Linking Words
period
, Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
number
had reached over 70%. At the same time, the Use synonyms
percentage
of vacuum Use synonyms
cleaner
increased from only 30% in 1920 to 100% in 2000.
Turning to the second Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
graph
, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
hours
of housework each week decreased gradually throughout the entire Use synonyms
period
. Use synonyms
This
Linking Words
number
fell more rapidly from 50 Use synonyms
hours
in 1920 to approximately 20 Use synonyms
hours
in 1960. Use synonyms
This
is a drop of 30 Linking Words
hours
in only 40 years. It Use synonyms
then
decreased more moderately until 2019, from 20 Linking Words
hours
to just over 10 Use synonyms
hours
.Use synonyms
Submitted by 695006028 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, percentage, period, number, hours with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
▼