In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are some citizens in
diffrent
nations seeing that spending large Correct your spelling
different
sum
of money Fix the agreement mistake
sums
in
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on
rail
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railway
way
lines between cities
is a wonderful idea .they think that it make the
transportation between Correct article usage
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cities
much eaiser
, Correct your spelling
easier
while
others, see that it is better to improve exisisting
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existing
puplic
transportation.Correct your spelling
public
As improving
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Improving
exisiting puplic
transport will help on increasing productivity, Correct your spelling
existing public
save
time and Correct word choice
and save
efforts
.In my Fix the agreement mistake
effort
opinion
improving it is better than constructing new Add a comma
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rail
stations.
On the one hand, bulding
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building
new
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a new
rail
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railway
way
will make traveling
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travelling
among
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to
diffrent
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different
cities
eaiser
than before.Correct your spelling
easier
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phenomenon will help the government to reach to
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apply
cities
eaiser
and Correct your spelling
easier
providing
them with subsidies and food. Wrong verb form
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For example
, Egypt built new
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a new
rail
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railway
way
between it's
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Cairo
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water
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and water
On the other hand
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in
cities
that are over crowded
. Those Correct your spelling
overcrowded
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have Correct your spelling
citizens
cities
many
employment and these Replace the quantifier
much
employment
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employees
wont
to go to their job fast without spending much time on Correct your spelling
want
roads
. Correct article usage
the roads
hence
their effort will be saved and the
productivity will be increased .Change the word
their
For instance
, In the Netherlands
the government pay attention to the Add a comma
,Netherlands
exisiting
roads there. Correct your spelling
existing
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, it is considered as
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apply
most
happiest nations it Change the adjective
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ranced
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ranked
rancid
ranged
it's
productivity is very high compared to other countries who prefer the first view as Egypt.
In conclusion, there are Replace the word
its
number
of people from some countries Change the article
a number
the number
prefer
increasing expenditures on new Correct pronoun usage
who prefer
rail
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railway
way
stations between cities
to make reaching to
it much quicker.Change preposition
apply
How ever
, others think that improving the Correct your spelling
However
exisiting puplic
transportation will lead to prosperity and welfare. In my opinion, the benefit of improving Correct your spelling
existing public
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existing
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is more than building new Correct pronoun usage
ones
rail
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