many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather than rent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The
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A
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number of
people
believe that
buy
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buying
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a
home
is better than
rent
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renting
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it.
This
writer
disagree
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disagrees
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with
this
statement. Because it is cheaper than
buy
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buying
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a
house
.
Moreover
,
rent
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renting
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a
home
is more mobility than another one. It must be understood that
rent
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renting
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a
house
is a good financial choice for
people
who can not earn a large. Because a
home
in recent years
is
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been
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criminally expensive and
it
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is
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increase
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increasing
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rapidly day after day,
specially
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especially
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in the city.
Average
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On average
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,
a
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apply
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normal
people
can buy a
house
without debt after 8 or 10 years
working
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of working
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.
Rent
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Renting
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a
house
can cost about 10 or 15%
the
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of the
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price of a
house
, they can
also
pay it monthly and can
also
keep it for another future plan or for other important expenses. Another point worth
consideration
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considering
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that is
rent
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renting
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a
house
is more mobility than
buy
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buying
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it. It is suitable for
people
whose
job
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jobs
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are not fixed or who want to change
the
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their
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life’s
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life
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location regularly. There are so many procedures to change the
home
and it
make
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makes
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people
do
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apply
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not want to do it after they know about that thing,
furthermore
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,furthermore
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it is more difficult to sell a
second hand
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second-hand
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house
and it
take
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takes
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to
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too
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much
of
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apply
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time to do that. In conclusion, there are more advantages for
rent
a
house
than
buy
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buying
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it because it is cheaper and
also
more mobility than
buy
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buying
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a
house
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • property ladder
  • mortgage
  • rental agreement
  • down payment
  • equity
  • appreciate
  • rental market
  • monthly installments
  • credit score
  • repairs and maintenance
  • landlord
  • tenant
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