The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the
rates
of men and women who can not read or write in 6 different areas in the previous year.
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Overall
, in all areas, the Linking Words
females'
illiteracy percentages were higher than male Change noun form
females
rates
, and the highest Use synonyms
rates
for both genders were in South Asia, Use synonyms
while
the lowest was recorded in the Developed countries.
The highest rate of females and males who can not read or write was in South Asia about 56% and around 34% respectively, Linking Words
while
the lowest percentage was in developed nations at less than 5% for both groups. Linking Words
Moreover
, In Latin AmericaLinking Words
and
,Caribbean there was a slight difference between illiterate males and females with around 10% for the first and approximately 12% for the late.
In the Arab world and East Correct word choice
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Asia
the Add a comma
,Asia
rates
of women unable to read or write are near to double men's Use synonyms
rates
and in Use synonyms
Africa
the percentages are 31% male and around 48% female which is a very big difference as well.Add a comma
,Africa
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