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The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given column graph depicts the increase in the percentage of the urban community in Africa, Asia,
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America
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 /
Caribbean
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 and the whole
world
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 from 1950 to 2000 and
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also gives
 predictions for 2030. It can be seen that the
population
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 escalated in all given
areas
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 of the
world
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 and is expected to grow
further
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. In 1950,
Latin
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America
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 and the
Caribbean
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 had the maximum urban
population
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, which constituted 42% of the total culture.
In contrast
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, Asia and Africa had much lesser
people
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 living in cities at 14% and 12% of the total
population
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 respectively. Just under a third of the
population
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 was of urbanites in the whole
world
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 in 1950. In 2000, Africa and Asia saw an almost threefold increase in urban public. In both these
areas
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 city populace became approximately 38% of the total.
Latin
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America
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 and the
Caribbean
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 had over two-thirds of the
people
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 in cities.
However
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, the whole
world
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 had an almost equal number of rural and urban
people
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 in 2000. It is predicted that by 2030 the urban
population
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 will continue to grow in all
areas
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 by 1015%. Almost 80% of
people
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 in
Latin
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America
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 and the
Caribbean
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 are expected to live in cities,
whereas
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 in the whole ,
world
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 the percentage of urbanites is estimated to be 60%.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the urban community has grown in all the given
areas
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 and is expected to grow in the future.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words latin, america, caribbean, world, population, areas, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban population
  • future predictions
  • historical data
  • urbanization trends
  • rates of growth
  • developed countries
  • developing countries
  • economic development
  • migration
  • government policies
  • upward trend
  • pace of urbanization
  • catching up
  • comparative analysis
  • regional differences
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