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In many parts of the world, children's were very different from today. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of life for children in the past?

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Today in many
countrys
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countries
due to
 the development of technology
children's
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children
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 have a lot of differences in living from
children
 of the past the following paragraphs describe the advantages and disadvantages of these differences. I think life for
children
 in the past had advantages. 
For example
, they did not spend much
time
 watching TV,
playing
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or playing
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 on the phone or computer, and they spent their
time
 on something better.  In his spare
time
, he plays with the
children
 living nearby, which teaches him to work in a team.  There is no pressure to succeed in
school
,
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 because
otherwise
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 the
children
 become timid.  It helps them not to be afraid of water
that
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so
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 they swim in rivers with their friends.  Walking to
school
 is a great benefit for their health.
On the other hand
, the
children
 who lived in the past
also
 had their disadvantages. 
For example
, they could not watch world news from anywhere, which caused
children
 to lag behind the times. 
While
 playing with
children
 in their spare
time
, they can get injured. 
Children
 were not pressured at
school
, resulting in
children
 being irresponsible.  Sometimes
children
 swim in the water and can drown if they bathe unsupervised.  And
while
 walking to
school
 in the past, he might be attacked on the street. In conclusion, I think these disadvantages are very few now.  Nowadays,
children
 are developing very fast.  They are spending
free
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their free
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time
 on something useful without wasting it.
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