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The advantages brought by the spread of English as a “global language” will outweigh disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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To begin
 with, with the rise of industrialization,
English
 has become a global
language
. Despite the disadvantages,
English
 is the most widely spoken
language
. Many believe the popularity of
English
 as a universal dialect outweighs its disadvantages. From my perspective
this
 is true. Undoubtedly,
English
 the most spoken
language
 in the world.
This
 has made it much easier for
people
 to communicate and understand each other.
Although
 the
English
 dialect is gaining popularity, there are various measures followed in order to preserve one's national
language
 and identity. Different cultural programs and events are conducted to promote one's identity and culture. The
English
language
 has removed the barrier which allows
people
 to understand each other. Tourists from various places can understand and communicate easily and clear their doubts.
For instance
, Kerela, a southern state in India, is gaining popularity among tourists. One of the major reasons is the
English
language
. the public of Kerela has a very high literacy rate and
people
 can communicate in
English
, which has made it much easier for tourists to understand the cultural integrity of the place.
Similarly
,
English
 as a global
language
 makes it easier for foreign students.
This
 makes it easier for them to study in a foreign
language
.
In addition
, it provides
people
 with employment opportunities.
People
 can work in a foreign country with ease if they can communicate with others
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they would struggle.
English
language
 breaks the barrier of
language
 and makes it easier for all
people
.
To conclude
, even if the
English
language
 has some disadvantages, the advantages outweigh
this
.
English
 as a universal
language
 has made it easier for
people
 to communicate with
people
 from around the globe.
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Ensure that each body paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the topic and provides detailed examples and explanations.
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Use linking words to show the connections between ideas within and between sentences and paragraphs.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global language
  • lingua franca
  • cultural exchange
  • economic opportunities
  • educational material
  • scientific research
  • technical documentation
  • innovation
  • knowledge dissemination
  • linguistic diversity
  • cultural identity
  • social and economic disparities
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