A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject.

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Dear Alex, Hope
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finds you in good condition. I am so glad to know that you are planning to immigrate
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Canada. The subject that I choose to
persue
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pursue
my studies was Accounting.
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,
this
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course will include business studies
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Economics.
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, I suggest you to go
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Yorkville University because you are
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and passionate individual, who can easily clear all the
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efficiently and effectively.
Additonaly
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, you already have
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background that will assist you in building
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a canadian
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canadian
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experience. Moving
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you can apply directly to
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board by emailing them all
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documents required and your bank statement. You will get the email address from the website. Hopefully, you will
recieve
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receive
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positive response from
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. If you need any assistance, please let me know. Best Regards, David
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prospective student
  • alma mater
  • curriculum
  • faculty
  • state-of-the-art
  • extramural
  • scholarly pursuits
  • cohort
  • accreditations
  • holistic development
  • pedagogy
  • thesis
  • dissertation
  • prerequisites
  • mentorship
  • application portal
  • tuition fees
  • scholarships
  • financial aid
  • internship opportunities
  • networking events
  • career services
  • personal statement
  • deadline
  • admissions office
  • recommendation letters
  • portfolio
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