The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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line graph gives information about the count of complaints made about roar to Newtown Environmental Health Authorities during the years between 1980 and 1996.
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,
it is clear that
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the main reasons for criticisms are the road works, traffic buzz, factories and domestic sounds.
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, we can see that the sounds created by household activities decreased,
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the other three reasons increased.
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, the complaints about the noise of road works grew noticeably high from 1988.
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, the traffic sound protest
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shows the same pattern as street projects,
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the upward trend of its showed a little bit low increase rate more than street projects.
On the other hand
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, the factory noise troubles increased dramatically. Though the domestic sound troubles decreased gradually from 650 to 100. Traffic turbulence grievances had been the same at 150 from 1996 to 1998. In 1982, the count of grievances that came about projects done by hoses and factories was the same at 600.
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