“Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.” discuss both views and give your opinion."

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, a considerable number of people

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the idea that parents should bring up their offspring with the

competition

skills

,

whereas

others consider that

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abilities exert a significant impact on children's growing

process

as an adult. In

this

article, I will be

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highlighting

both views and

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giving my own opinion on

this

notion.

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the

one

side,

sense

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of

competition

has a tremendous effect on

juveniles

' academic performance.

In other words

, when they feel they are in a scientific race with others, they might be more interested

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the

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fundamental subjects

such

as maths, literature,

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.

For example

, teachers particularly award the

one

who is more talented, more logical,

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more fast

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at learning,

thus

they commence an academic race between children to foster

learning

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process

.

Hence

, both teachers and parents ought to encourage

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children to increase their academic performance with the help of

competition

.

On the other hand

,

the

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co-operation

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has an enormous influence on

juveniles

' growing

process

, as they perform brainstorming

skills

together with

their peers and allocate,

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their ideas.

For example

, as a technical task, students are asked to design a cartoon car, it is probable that students who work together would outperform

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rather

than those who worked alone,

as well as

would be benign individuals for

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society.

To sum up

, both co-operation and

competition

skills

have pros and cons

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juveniles

' future goal as

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useful person for

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society. My personal view is that parents should mainly focus on

one

of them to make their offspring

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form as

one

of the main

skills

.