You have seen an advertisement of a valudable equipment. Write a letter to your manager and ask to buy that product to be used in your company. Include the following in your letter: - What the equipment is - How it can be useful for the company - Describe the procedure for buying the equipment

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Dear Mr Ahmed, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing to you today to discuss the potential acquisition of a new machine that could be of great benefit to our firm.

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,The machine I am referring to is the 2022 Plora Printing Machine.

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innovative device can print all types of documents in brilliant colours and can be connected to our company's network. It boasts numerous modes for copying and has a user-friendly touchscreen interface.

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apparatus could greatly enhance our corporation in a number of ways.

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, it can print at a rate of 65 pages per minute and can be accessed wirelessly from an employee's phone or computer, whether they are inside or outside the company. These features could greatly improve the work process and save valuable time.

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, and unfortunately, the cost of

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tool is currently beyond our budget. In order to acquire it, we would need to either wait for upcoming project funds or sell our current photocopier and outdated computers, which have not been in use for decades. I believe that

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appliance would be a valuable addition to our workplace. I am not the only one who could benefit from it, and I hope that you will consider our proposal. Yours Sincerely, Mohammed Albayati

mohammedbayati98Thu Aug 17 2023

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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216 words

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