The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012.

The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012.
The bar chart compares the gender distribution of
men
and
women
teaching
staff
members of certain universities in 2012.
Overall
, from seven faculties, male
staff
dominated at four
majors
while
women
only at three
majors
.
Moreover
, the significant gap between the number of male and female
staff
can be witnessed in Engineering and Education
majors
.
By contrast
, in Medicine
majors
, the
difference
is only negligible.
According to
the graph, Engineering faculties are dominated by male
staff
, with a gap of percentage around 80%
men
and 20%
women
. The same gap
also
happens in Education faculties, with
women
staff
dominating approximately three-quarters of the total
staff
.
Similarly
, the
difference
was less significant in law, with man
staff
occupying 60% of the total
staff
. The same situation
also
happens in the Business and Science faculty, with almost 65% of
men
and 35% of
women
staff
. Looking at another condition, there is a thin
difference
in the Medicine faculty, the woman
staff
and
men
staff
sharing almost the same percentage, the
difference
is only about 2%.
Additionally
, the Arts major had a similar
difference
in percentage, about 55% of
women
staff
are teaching in Arts.
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