The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012.

The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012.
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The bar chart compares the gender distribution of
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and
women
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teaching
staff
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members of certain universities in 2012.
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, from seven faculties, male
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dominated at four
majors
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while
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women
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only at three
majors
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.
Moreover
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, the significant gap between the number of male and female
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can be witnessed in Engineering and Education
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.
By contrast
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, in Medicine
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, the
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is only negligible.
According to
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the graph, Engineering faculties are dominated by male
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, with a gap of percentage around 80%
men
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and 20%
women
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. The same gap
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happens in Education faculties, with
women
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staff
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dominating approximately three-quarters of the total
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.
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, the
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was less significant in law, with man
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occupying 60% of the total
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. The same situation
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happens in the Business and Science faculty, with almost 65% of
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and 35% of
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staff
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. Looking at another condition, there is a thin
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in the Medicine faculty, the woman
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and
men
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staff
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sharing almost the same percentage, the
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is only about 2%.
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, the Arts major had a similar
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in percentage, about 55% of
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staff
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are teaching in Arts.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, staff, majors, difference with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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