The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012.
The bar chart compares the gender distribution of
men
and women
teaching staff
members of certain universities in 2012. Overall
, from seven faculties, male staff
dominated at four majors
while
women
only at three majors
. Moreover
, the significant gap between the number of male and female staff
can be witnessed in Engineering and Education majors
. By contrast
, in Medicine majors
, the difference
is only negligible.
According to
the graph, Engineering faculties are dominated by male staff
, with a gap of percentage around 80% men
and 20% women
. The same gap also
happens in Education faculties, with women
staff
dominating approximately three-quarters of the total staff
. Similarly
, the difference
was less significant in law, with man staff
occupying 60% of the total staff
. The same situation also
happens in the Business and Science faculty, with almost 65% of men
and 35% of women
staff
.
Looking at another condition, there is a thin difference
in the Medicine faculty, the woman staff
and men
staff
sharing almost the same percentage, the difference
is only about 2%. Additionally
, the Arts major had a similar difference
in percentage, about 55% of women
staff
are teaching in Arts.Submitted by citraa88 on
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