The graph below shows the wheat export of three different areas from 1985 to 1990

The graph below shows the wheat export of three different areas from 1985 to 1990
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The line graph illustrates data on the
export
Use synonyms
figures of 3 various regions between 1985 and 1990.
Overall
Linking Words
,
Canada
Use synonyms
experienced a fluctuation and
although
Linking Words
starting on top and registering the highest amount of
wheat
Use synonyms
export
Use synonyms
, it finished in second place. European Community had been the second highest exporter in the beginning yet increased to become the at the peak in the end. Australia remained in the
last
Linking Words
spot during the period. Starting off with
Canada
Use synonyms
where it initializes with just shy of 20 in 1985. After a slight decline for a year,
Canada
Use synonyms
witnessed a steep climb in
wheat
Use synonyms
export
Use synonyms
for the next two years reaching its peak in 1988 (25).
Subsequently
Linking Words
, the Canadian
wheat
Use synonyms
market saw a precipitous drop to become a little under 15 in 1989 meaning that the European Community exceed
Canada
Use synonyms
as the highest exporter of
wheat
Use synonyms
and eventually, finished at approximately 18
at the end
Linking Words
of the period. The European community commenced from second place (16) and underwent a consistent rise after a year's marginal cut. They finished at 21 in 1990 resulting in achieving the title of the largest
wheat
Use synonyms
exporter. Turning to Australia,
this
Linking Words
country began with 15 in 1985 and experienced a negligible rise for one year (16 in 1986).
Linking Words
Then
Correct your spelling
The
show examples
Australian
wheat
Use synonyms
export
Use synonyms
fell moderately for the rest of the period reaching 12 in 1990.
Submitted by sajadtorab on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words export, canada, wheat with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: