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Many students do part-time work while they are studying. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

#students #work #outweigh
inflation is increasing day by day to fulfil the needs of daily
life
, work has been making the basic need of everyone's
life
. As far as
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 am concerned that
this
 part-time trend has more benefits than its demerits.I would like to put a headlight on both views in the upcoming paragraphs. Elaborating above, the reason for prioritising
this
 would be considered as a good benefit of self-dependency because if they work within study
then
 they can know in a better way how to earn money and be stable financially.
secondly
, it helps them to prepare for their future goals because within investigation time they can get more experienced and get a good job by illustrating their working skills in any good organization because task time only practical knowledge is required not theoretical one.
Moreover
 , they do not need to depend on their parents to buy anything because they are self-earners who can achieve anything in their
life
according to
 their own needs . On the other ,side it has disadvantages,
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 can say that students feel more difficulty making a balance between both things because in most cases, students have to attend in-person classes that's why in case if they don't follow a proper study routine, in
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 they get lower grades and
this
 put
overall
 bad impact on their
life
. To some extent , it is considered a form of depression when the influx of things gets together in their mind.
To conclude
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 opine that every key has a lock so we can not deny both aspects but the advantages are more than their demerits. Everything plays a different role regarding work and study.if a person is fully motivated
then
 nothing can be more harmful.
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