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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this proposal?

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Music
 is believed by some to unite
people
 of different
ages
 and
cultures
. I tend to agree with
this
 statement. In my opinion,
music
 can gather
people
 of different
ages
. I like listening to
music
 and I always like to read the comments under the songs. I found that there are
people
from
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 all
ages
 showing their love
to
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 the song. It’s lucky to find
people
 with the same interests.
Moreover
,
However
, I don’t think
music
 can bring
people
with
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 different
cultures
 together. Nowadays, more and more famous singers use
music
 to express their dissatisfaction with a certain person or a certain
culture
. Their words are sometimes extreme and may conflict with
people
 from other
cultures
.
For example
, some white singers would use bad words
such
 as nigger in their songs.
Such
 discriminatory words will make the conflict between
people
 of the two
cultures
 bigger and bigger.
In addition
, song styles vary from country to country and from
culture
 to
culture
.Some
people
 may not like songs in other styles or languages. They might find it strange to listen to. All in all, I agree that
music
 is a good way to bring
people
 of different
ages
 together, but I don’t think that
music
 can gather
people
 of different
culture
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. Since
people
 from different
cultures
 can't understand each other’s
music
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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