Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, some people believe that loosing of
animals
and plant species is the largest problem that causes
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the environment,
while
others think that there are many reasons for environmental
pollution
more than that.
This
essay will take both these statement under examination and indicates my view in the end. As the reason for increasing the population peoples' day today's wants are
also
being advanced including food and houses. Because of
this
situation
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most
animals
lost their homes.
Although
civilians use
plants
for their uses without control and it
also
causes the
animals
badly. Loss of species of
animals
and
plants
occur dangerous problems
such
as global warming, drought conditions, desertification, and many more.
On the other hand
, there are
also
some other problems that cause for the environment. For example, sound
pollution
, water
pollution
and air
pollution
done by industries and households are some of them.
Moreover
,
this
also
leads the global danger. Human health issues, Acid rain, and soil
pollution
are happened by these things.
Although
, when we stop
pollution
and get some action to reduce losing species of
animals
and
plants
it help us to build up a green world. We can
also
reduce Elnino Lanino's situation, and lack of food by controlling the reasons for these things. I believe that both groups have claimed considerable arguments. But I agree that the most effective problem is losing
animals
and
plants
,
whereas
the reason for the other kind of problems is
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.
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in the oxygen amount, decay of the ozone layer, global warming, lack of water and other goods which are the most dangerous.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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