The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart describes how much
production
and
consumption
of
electricity
is used among ten
countries
in 2014. It looks like there was a slight difference between
production
and
consumption
among
countries
.
First,
China
had the biggest
electricity
production
among others (5,398
billion
kWh
). It was followed by the United States (US), which had less
electricity
production
than
China
. There were 1,299
billion
kWh
differences between
China
and the US.
However
, there was a very big gap between both of the
countries
, and others
such
as
Rusia
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Russia
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, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea (around 3,000 - 3,500
billion
kWh
).
Korea
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Korea's
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Rep. was the smallest
electricity
production
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producer
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in 2024.
China
also
had the biggest
electricity
consumption
(5,322
billion
kWh
). It was the same as the previous one before, the US was known
had
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a relatively smaller
consumption
than
China
. Almost all
countries
had more
production
than
consumption
. But, it was different in Germany, which had more
consumption
than
production
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the production
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of
electricity
.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dual aspect
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • industrial base
  • population size
  • significant difference
  • surplus
  • deficit
  • electrical energy
  • ranking
  • economic patterns
  • industrial patterns
  • technological advancements
  • disparity
  • industrial development
  • economic capabilities
  • anomalies
  • export
  • import
  • energy efficiency
  • waste
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