The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989

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The bar chart illustrates data about the proportion of the average fees of home ownership in New

York

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Madrid

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, Tokyo,

Frankfurt

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, and London over the period of 13 years, from 1990 to 2002 in comparison to 1989. From the statistics, it can be inferred that New

York

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is responsible for the highest level of cost compared to other countries.

Also

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Frankfurt

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and

Madrid

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's residents paid the lowest fee during these years. From 1990 to 1995, the cost of houses went down by around 7% in the first 5 years in Tokyo and London.

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, dwellers in New

York

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paid 5% lower than in 1989.

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, prices increased approximately 2% in

Frankfurt

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and

Madrid

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. between 1996 to 2002, individuals in London experienced a significant rise in house pay around 12% compared to the year 1989.

while

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the cost of accommodation in New

York

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jumped by 5%, Tokyo declined by exactly

this

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number.

In addition

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, prices in

Frankfurt

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remained cheaper but in

Madrid

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rose by a

further

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2%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words york, madrid, frankfurt with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

167 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

fluctuation
suburb
metropolitan
trend
appreciation
depreciation
residential market
housing bubble
real estate
economic factors
urbanization
infrastructure development
property value
inflation-adjusted
comparative analysis

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The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989

A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A close friend stayed at your house for a few days and forgot to take his watch when he left. Write a letter to this friend and: Inform him that he has forgotten his watch Explain why you can’t post it. . Ask if he can pick it up.

A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.