the graph below shows the number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004

the graph below shows the number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004
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The given graph depicts the measured number of
elephants
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in some Asian areas from 1997 to 2004.
Overall
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,
whereas
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India had the most
elephants
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, China,
on the other hand
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, had the least amount of
elephants
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in all areas. Cambodia was the only country with a downward trend after 7 years. India dominated in the year 1997 with nearly 9000
elephants
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, and still had the most quantity despite the fall down to just over 7500
elephants
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. The country with the second highest number of
elephants
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, Myanmar had 5000
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in 1997,
then
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a drop down to over 4000 in 2004. Vietnam in the year 1997 had approximately 2000
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, about three times more than in China, and the ratio continued to happen 7 years later. Sri Lanka in 1997 was estimated to have about 3000
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,
then
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a small decrease to just over 2500. Cambodia and Laos had the same measure of
elephants
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in 1997, but
while
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Cambodia increased by a noticeable amount, Laos
in contrast
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decreased. By 1997, Thailand was the third highest with about 4000
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, 1000 more than that in Malaysia. That difference still occurred in the next 7 years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words elephants with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuated
  • decline
  • increase
  • drop
  • steady decrease
  • recover
  • habitat loss
  • poaching
  • efforts
  • protect
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