the graph below shows the number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004

the graph below shows the number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004
The given graph depicts the measured number of
elephants
in some Asian areas from 1997 to 2004.
Overall
,
whereas
India had the most
elephants
, China,
on the other hand
, had the least amount of
elephants
in all areas. Cambodia was the only country with a downward trend after 7 years. India dominated in the year 1997 with nearly 9000
elephants
, and still had the most quantity despite the fall down to just over 7500
elephants
. The country with the second highest number of
elephants
, Myanmar had 5000
elephants
in 1997,
then
a drop down to over 4000 in 2004. Vietnam in the year 1997 had approximately 2000
elephants
, about three times more than in China, and the ratio continued to happen 7 years later. Sri Lanka in 1997 was estimated to have about 3000
elephants
,
then
a small decrease to just over 2500. Cambodia and Laos had the same measure of
elephants
in 1997, but
while
Cambodia increased by a noticeable amount, Laos
in contrast
decreased. By 1997, Thailand was the third highest with about 4000
elephants
, 1000 more than that in Malaysia. That difference still occurred in the next 7 years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words elephants with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuated
  • decline
  • increase
  • drop
  • steady decrease
  • recover
  • habitat loss
  • poaching
  • efforts
  • protect
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