You recently bought a piece of sports equipment from an online store. When you first used the piece of sports equipment, you found a problem with it. Write a letter to the manager of the online store. In your letter describe the problem with the piece of sports equipment say what happened because of the problem explain what you would like the company to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to report the faulty badminton shuttlecock launcher that I purchased from your store. My name is Maninder Kaur and I ordered

this

machine on 25th July and received it on 5th August. When I turned it on, it started making a noise indicating that the shuttle is stuck in its valve. After two or three minutes, it started working but throwing cocks at a greater speed. As I started practising, one cock hit my hand so hard

due to

automatic setting changes that it left a scratch on my hand and it keeps hurting. I have a district-level match next month and I cannot practice for some days. I am scared as I will not be able to practice. I am exceedingly displeased with the quality as it was my first time ordering from your store. It would be great if you could send a technician to repair the machine or an exchange would be

also

appreciated. I look forward to hearing from you immediately. Yours faithfully, Maninder Kaur

Submitted by manindermand28 on Fri Aug 18 2023

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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8 paragraphs

178 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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